Monday, 6 July 2015

A broken one is a stronger one



Collecting the itsy-bitsy,
broken pieces of my wrecked heart.
Cementing them like earlier and
letting the wounds heal is a fine art.

Perhaps, it may seem even more vulnerable
and fragile than it was before,
Yet indeed, I know it is so firm,
immune and invincible in the core.

Thereafter if any such situation comes,
and you're once again done.
This resilient heart would let you know,
A broken one is a stronger one.

It may seem facile, but can't be undone.
My solo journey has already begun.
That's a fiery fact and not a pun,
A broken one is a stronger one.

In all these years, you've always won.
Deluded me often, made be stunned.
But now it's time for me to outrun,
As a broken one is a stronger one.
26 comments:
  1. Strong words there :) Liked the flow :) A broken one is a stronger one indeed! best wishes.

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      It's good to see you on my blog. :)

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  2. This actually reminds me of a partially broken Arnold Terminator collecting pieces of him, putting them back, and coming back to beat up the bad machines :D

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    1. Haha, It's good to hear an atypical perspective. Thanks for stopping by Teny :)

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  3. When you overcome hurdles in life you achieve something substantial. This poem testifies to that.

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  4. very strong emotions... loved it Deeshani :-)

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  5. "poignant" piece of writing... well written... :-)

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  6. Poignant, but strong :) May the breaks heal as you keep moving foward. Liked it.

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    1. Glad to know that. Thanks so much for reading and appreciating it. :)

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  7. I loved this poem so much that I couldn't help reading it twice. Beautiful, Deeshani.
    My favorite lines are "My solo journey has already begun.
    That's a fiery fact and not a pun,
    A broken one is a stronger one." So lovely and powerful symbolizing a strong and independent woman :)

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    1. Awww.. it's always good to hear from you Purba. :)
      I'm very glad that you liked it so much.. means a lot :)

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      Good to see you on my blog. :)

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  9. Great poem about resilience..liked it. Once broken and put back together...it's an exercise in mastering the act of resilience...indeed to come out stronger. May the zest never die. Amen! :)

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    1. Yes that's absolutely right. Thanks a lot Bushra :)

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  11. The poem flows beautifully and smoothly. May you stay immune and invincible forever.

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  12. True, pain teaches us a lot. We change for better.
    Beautiful poem.

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    1. Yes, it makes us stronger than we were before. :)
      Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating it :)

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  13. Wow I just realized that I have stumbled on an amazing blog, loved the strong emotion adhered to the silent strong poem:)

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    1. Awww, many thanks Brunda. You're a sweetheart :)

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