Monday, 13 July 2015

Amazeballs Waterfalls


Torrents of the leak,

Dribbling down the peak.

Jet flow travels,

oozing out of gravels.

Plantation is the hedge,

With forest at the edge.

Current flowing, rushing,

dripping, splashing, gushing!

18 comments:
  1. first thing that comes to my mind as i read poem is sound of waterfall.I find this peaceful. :)

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    1. So glad to know you found it peaceful. Thanks for stopping by. :)

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  2. Refreshes my Niagara Falls trip. Lovely writing, Deeshani.

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    1. I glad to know that. Thank you so much.. :)

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  3. splash splash... nice Deeshani :-)

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  4. Lines as good as the pic. :)

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  5. Nice rhyme :) Reminds me of a few Falls in Kerala :)

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    1. Would love to know more about them. Thanks a lot :)

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  6. Beautifully put... love your rhyme style :)

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    1. Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you loved it :)

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  7. You have a wonderful sense of rhyming Deeshani. One can close eyes and imagine the jet flows oozing out of gravels. :)

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words. They motivate me to write even more. :))

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