Sunday, 5 July 2015

And She Fell

I was unconscious
She was too in her slumber-land
All of a sudden I heard a sound of locomotion. 
As soon as I got my consciousness, 
I saw her near the verge. 
I wasn't able to see clearly
Nevertheless, I rubbed my eyes several times.
She unwittingly progressed towards the side
Now, she was just slightly away 
from falling down to extremity. 
I wanted to forestall this situation. 
But she was far out of the reach. 
I bleated with full power to acquaint her. 
She got frightened from my screaming
 and fell off the bed. Poor baby!

  1. nicely written... good creativity... the last three lines or better to say the way you have penned the climax is optimum... beautiful poem...

  2. Ouch! The poem kept me on my toes. Wonderfully written :)

    1. That's so sweet of you to say Purba :) Thanks for reading. :)

  3. Beautiful indeed! Flow-full but flawless.


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