Sunday, 5 July 2015

And She Fell


I was unconscious
She was too in her slumber-land
All of a sudden I heard a sound of locomotion. 
As soon as I got my consciousness, 
I saw her near the verge. 
I wasn't able to see clearly
Nevertheless, I rubbed my eyes several times.
She unwittingly progressed towards the side
Now, she was just slightly away 
from falling down to extremity. 
I wanted to forestall this situation. 
But she was far out of the reach. 
I bleated with full power to acquaint her. 
She got frightened from my screaming
 and fell off the bed. Poor baby!


5 comments:
  1. nicely written... good creativity... the last three lines or better to say the way you have penned the climax is optimum... beautiful poem...

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  2. Ouch! The poem kept me on my toes. Wonderfully written :)

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    1. That's so sweet of you to say Purba :) Thanks for reading. :)

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  3. Beautiful indeed! Flow-full but flawless.

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