Sunday, 12 July 2015

Charm of The Clouds


The Ghosts of the sky,

Launching dominion over hills.

When dreary zones are dry,

Their dark shadow thrills.

Sorcery of the scenery,

Packed with watery drops.

Escorting the greenery,

The white hats of crops.

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  1. beautiful :) really like use of metaphor here :)

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    1. Thanks Sachin, glad you liked it. :)

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  2. I love the use of words here :)
    "The Ghosts of the sky", "Sorcery of the scenery" - my favourite usages :)

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    1. I'm glad to know that Teny. Your choice seems to be magical indeed :D Thanks for reading :)

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  3. Your choices of metaphors bowled me over. Superb! :)

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    1. Thank you so much dear. That's so sweet of you to say :)

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  4. Beautiful poem Deesha,loved the metaphorical usage , described is the mundane,with the hands of skill and mind of pearly words:)GO On..love to read more of your works:)

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    1. Thanks a ton dear, it's good to see you here. Keep visiting :)

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  5. white hats of crops~ so lovely! This will stay with me for a long time.
    You painted a beautiful painting with your words dear :)

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    1. I am so glad to hear that dear. Thanks a bunch. lots of hugs. :)

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  6. Lovely lines Deeshani the kinds that one would like to read over and over again.

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    1. Thank you so much, it means a lot. :))

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  7. Every time I read you, I am short of words. You are too good, Deeshani :)

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    1. Thank you so much, You're such a sweetheart. :)

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  8. Very lovely poetry, love the words.

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