Thursday, 23 July 2015

Dazzling night



City lights at night,

Planetarium delight,

Prepossessing sight.


Mingling of bright hues,

Impeccably change my blues,

Grants wings to my shoes.


Because I thought, a Haiku was customary. So here it is, my first attempt :) Also, I apologize in advance if it wasn't upto the mark. :|
Picture credits: Abhinav Chawla
28 comments:
  1. nice one for first attempt :) keep writing :)

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  2. Nice try Deeshani, esply wings on shoes...nice! I would wait for a classic Haiku from you (which has reference of or relates to nature) :)

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    1. Sure I will, in a day or two ;-) Thank you dear :))

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  3. Very good for a first attempt Deeshani 😊

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  4. Nice attempt, Deeshani... I loved the first one more...it creates an imagery ..a huge planetarium...the cityscape... :-)

    Keep on writing... :-)

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    1. I am so glad to know that. :) Thank you. :)

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    1. Thank you Ashish.. I'm glad you liked it :)

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  6. Great attempt Deeshani.. especially I loved "Impeccably change my blues"... way to go! Keep blooming :*

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    1. Thank you dear :) means a lot.. seriously :*

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  7. I loved the first one more...planetarium delight sounds so wonderful to the ear :)

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    1. It's even more wonderful to eye ;) Thanks a lot dear :)

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  8. I have never managed to write a Haiku! This is nice :)

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    1. Haha.. You should try writing one.. I'm sure you'll do pretty well.. Moreover, you have the vampire community support too ;)

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    2. The community will try to come to a positive decision on the same :D

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    1. Seriously? Thank you :) I'm so glad to know that. :)

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  10. Excellent Deeshani! I liked both , 2nd one more with hues washing out the blues.:)

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    1. Thank you so much.. I never expected this coming.. means a lot! :))

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  11. good one ...keep it up.
    i'm also crazy about writing. i need your support here
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    1. Sure! Thank you and Welcome to my blog.. :)

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  12. Liked the first one more :) Keep writing.

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    1. Yes I will.. :) and Thank you.. I'm glad to know that. :))

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  13. Nothing less said here Deshani.. Too good in the first attempt itself.. Best wishes!

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    1. Thank you so much, Sir.. I'm glad you liked it.. Have a nice day! :)

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