Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Haiku- Rain Dance

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Eager to advance,

In his tuxedo and pants.

Proposed for rain dance.


She just gave a glance,

He didn't lose this crucial chance,

And exhaled romance.


Endearing couple danced,

In exhilarated trance,

On blissful expanse.

32 comments:
  1. Loved this...rhyming is so good.

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  2. very well written Deeshani... loved the last para...
    btw - I like the way you write rhyming verses... it's something I never do because I like to keep it different from my regular poems... that reminds me that I haven't written a regular poem in ages since the day I got hooked to writing Haiku :-)

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    1. I'm sure you'd be the queen of the regular poems as well.. Looking forward to read one soon from your side ;) And thanks a lot..!! It's always good to hear from you :) Much love <3

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  3. This is beautiful. Never miss a chance, you never know when you get lucky.

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    1. Thank you so much and yes you never know what may be coming for you! :)

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  4. you got rhyming in haiku too :D awesome :D

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    1. Hehe I even rhyme when I talk.. Got so used to it.. Can't help it :D

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    1. Thanks a lot.. So glat you found it so :))

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    1. Thank you so much Ma'am.. I'm glad you liked it :)

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  7. Romantic :)
    Nice words & choice of pic.
    Rain-dance reminds me of Hindi movie- Jab We met- 'Tum se hi' song

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    1. Thank you so much.. Tum se hi is one of my favorites :)

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  8. So romantic, Deeshani :) I love everything about rain especially music, dance and romance :)

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    1. Thank you so much dearest :) I too love the rain :)

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  9. Rain and dance! Amazing experience! :)

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    1. Absolutely! :D Thanks much for the visit Teny :)

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  10. Dancing in the rain. Forgetting about the pain. ...what a thought of writing a poem about it. There's lovely romantic rhyme and rythm to this poem :)

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    1. Thanks a ton.. I'm glad you liked it :) Keep visiting! :)

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  11. This is is so romantic Deeshani. Your rhymes make it all the more blissful. I love everything about rains that you have incorporated in it.

    PS: Loved the cover pic used. <3

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    1. Aww thanks much sweetie.. and I love the too :) <3

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  12. Romantic ..lyrical ...sweet .Beautifully penned girl :) :)

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    1. Thanks a ton dear.. so glad you liked it :))

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  13. Dancing in trance makes it replete with romance. Beautiful Deeshani. :))

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    1. Sure it does..!! thanks a lot.. I'm glad you liked it :) :)

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  14. Beautiful.... I loved the rhyming here...:-)

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  15. Wonderful poem and great rhyming with the essence of the scene intact till the end :)

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    1. Thanks a lot.. so glad to know you found it so :)

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