Monday, 20 July 2015

Miraculous Town

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Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,

Azure sky flashing the brightest hue.

Instantly the greens seized the view,

Grasses engulfed in morning dew.


Then, silvery glare struck my sight,

The shimmering hills, a lustrous delight.

Clouds dazzling with tints of white,

Guiding back the glory in light.


Rocks and pebbles tinged with brown,

In the aesthetic hamlet of fair renown.

Ogling the jumble of colors all around,

Confessing the grandeur of miraculous town.
28 comments:
  1. how come you rhyme every poem so well like a solved puzzle :D fan of your poems ! keep writing :)

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    1. hehe.. Thanks for your kind words,.. means a lot :)

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  2. What a picture you have painted with your words, Deeshani! So fresh & delightful. Lived it. :)

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    1. Thank you so much Ravish. Glad you found it so. :)

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  3. Visually appealing and filled with love, passion, gratitude and power vibes, Deeshani:)

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    1. Thanks a ton for your kind words Vishal. :)

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  4. Wow :) Your words have created a wonderful picture - indeed a miraculous town.

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    1. Thank you so much. Keep visiting. :)

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  5. what a picture and what amazing words to go with it Deeshani :-) awesome! :-)

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  6. The words have complimented the pic well. :)

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    1. I am so glad to know that. Thank you.. :))

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  7. Wow...What a beginning!

    "Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,
    Azure sky flashing the brightest hue."

    And equally beautiful, it continues...Mesmerizing dear :')

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    1. Awww.. thanks a lot dear.. Your kind words always stimulate me to write more. :))

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  8. Amazing poem.

    Cheers,

    Sriram & Krithiga

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    1. Thanks a lot. I'm glad to know that.Welcome to my blog :))

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  9. I loved the rhyming flow of the poem. Very pretty and delightful :)

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    1. Thank you dear :) I am glad that you found it so :))

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  10. What could be more refreshing than grasses engulfed in morning dew! A beautiful ode to the grandeur of a miraculous town.

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    1. Absolutely! Thank you so much. It's always good to hear from you :)

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  11. The use of picture and the words painting the picture - inspires me to travel! :)

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    1. I am glad that it could. Thanks for the visit :))

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  12. You create such a beautiful picture with your words..lovely !!! :)

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    1. That's really sweet of you to say :) Thank you and welcome to my blog :)
      Keep visiting!

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  13. Such a town always is there in our dreams..isn't it? Beautifully painted with God's own pallette...

    The rhyming is wonderfully done... :-)

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    1. Yes absolutely! Thank you so much for the visit. :)

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