Friday, 24 July 2015

Nature's Rage


Outrageous wild flames,

Infuriation of sky,

Clouds breathe a sigh.



Mysterious dye,

Sprawling darkness, air goes dry,

Bare trees terrified.



Tranquilly we lie,

Serenely blinding the eye,

Letting the world die.



Haiku Attempt #2
Picture Credits- Abhinav Chawla
30 comments:
  1. Deeshani, I'm stopping by via the Cherished blogfest, look forward to your post. Going by your posts like this one, I know it would be lyrical and beautiful.

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    1. Thank you.. and I'm ready with the post.. yay!! ;)

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  2. fast learner huh ;) :D someone is getting better with haiku :D matches with pic exactly :) keep writing :)

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    1. Haha.. I'm glad that you think so :D Thanks a lot! :)

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  3. Brilliant composition, Deeshani:)

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  4. Excellent flow of words..!!!

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    1. Thanks a lot.. And welcome to my blog :)

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  5. There you are Deeshani. Both words and the pic depict a infuriated sky. Lovely haiku

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    1. I'm glad you liked it.. Thank you so much :)

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  6. Going nicely with the Haiku world, I see! :)

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  7. Nature inspires so many emotions. Beautiful expression.

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    1. Sure it does :) Thank you so much dear :)

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  8. And this is one thought-provoking one. Loved it! <3

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    1. Thanks a lot dear.. I'm glad that you loved it :) <3

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  10. Very well written. I like the rhyme in the lines.

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  11. Rhyming and lyrical! A wonderful feat ...loved it :)

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    1. I'm so glad you did.. thanks much dear :)

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  12. A big round of applause for this one.... ^_^

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