Monday, 3 August 2015

Flash 55- Trespassing

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Despite of being adamant, 
she was guilty of trespassing,
the guidelines that she established, herself.

It wasn't something, 
that she intended, 
or had planned for.

On the spur of the moment, 
she was tempted!
to commit the forbidden act.

Finally, she nullified her guilt,
 of eating the mud cake 
by working out for extra hours. 
35 comments:
  1. Wow.Was seriously thinking the reason for her guilty.The final stanza reveals it.Hahaha.Lovely.:).

    Cheers,

    Sriram & Krithiga

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    1. Haha.. That's the beauty of fiction ;) Thanks much for stopping by. :)

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    1. Thank you so much.. Keep visiting! :)

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  3. Oh, I have done that trespass. Such a clever piece!

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    1. Hehe.. Indeed, we all commit such tiny breaches in our lives.. Thanks a lot Susie.. And welcome to my space :)

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  4. Great poem on trespassing and repenting, with a twist :D

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    1. Yay!.. I'm glad to know that.. many thanks for reading! :)

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    1. Hehe.. Mud cake is indeed the yummiest ;) Thanks a lot :)

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  6. Sometimes we make rules for ourselves which are too difficult to follow through.

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    1. True Kerry.. Thanks a lot for the visit and welcome to my blog! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Debajyoti :D Getting inspired from your humor :D

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  8. Good ending. Made me smile. :)

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    1. I'm glad to know that. Keep visiting :)

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  9. Awww.. hats off to your wit. Loved this piece Deshani <3

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    1. Thanks a lot my dear.. I'm glad to know you loved it :)

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  10. Poetry with lovely sense of humour. Enjoyed it, Deeshani. Full Paisa Wasool piece :)

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    1. My purpose is served then..;) Thanks a lot Ravish.. :)

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  11. awww.... :-)
    that reminds me that I have to start my workouts too... :-)

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    1. Oh that's cool.. I am too lazy to do it :D
      Thanks for stopping by.. :) <3

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  12. Hahaha... I do that, I mean eat, but I never ever work out. Hence the extra pounds on my body.

    Loved it!

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    1. We are in the same boat buddy ;)
      Thanks much.. :)

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  13. this is so nice... an interesting read... great work Deeshani... :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashish.. glad to know that :)

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  14. Loved it especially the last stanza brought a smile.

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