Tuesday, 25 August 2015

If only

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If I were a pen,
I'd have fabricated,
an astounding drama.

If I were the shoes,
I'd have climbed the colossal mountains,
To touch the vivid sky.

If I were a bird,
I'd have flew till the horizon,
To explore the zenith.

If I were the light,
I'd have kept gleaming,
In the darkest nights.

If only,
I were not just a mere dream,
But an earnest intention,
I'd have made myself dignified..
20 comments:
  1. Seeing a lovely poem after a gap Deeshani.. :-)

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    1. Thank you so much dear. :) I'm sorry for not posting anything from quite a while.. But I'l try my best to post more often :)

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  2. AND...
    If I were a camera,
    I would fore-click all the glorious moments
    That you would soon achieve with your brilliant composition :*

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    1. Awww.. that's so sweet of you to say, my dear.. thanks a ton for the lovely comment.. :) Hugs! :*

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  3. Great poem. These if-only feelings are helpful and harmful also.

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    1. True that.. Thank you so much for appreciating :)

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  4. beautiful Deeshani... loved the birds wala verse :-)

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    1. And I like your sweet wala comment on this post :) :*

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  5. So nicely explained our aspirations amidst the constraints around.. Well said, Deeshani

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  6. lovely creation... great piece of writing... :-)

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  7. That's a lovely poem, Deeshani. I didn't know dream could write that good :-D

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    1. It could do wonders if given the wings to fly.. :) Thank you so much :)

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  8. Such a wonderful poem that touches the chords of the heart and make you ponder.
    Missed you and your poems, Deeshani.
    So good to read you. Much love :-*

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  9. I wish to be the birds and the shoes :D Lovely work :)
    And what if you were a vampire? ;)

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  10. Brilliant poem Deeshani.

    Cheers,
    Sriram & Krithiga

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  11. We are full of so many If's...beautifully, emotive piece

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