Sunday, 1 November 2015

Lost Hope

I've let you down,

My hopes are drowned.

The fancy wishes and matchless dreams,

Have shattered now to furthest extremes.

And my dark nights are haunted with screams.

The dejecting voices yelling in my ears,

You can't do it, inflaming my fears..

I know I've been indolent, in my path

Missed numerous opportunities,

But I've also been firm in the most parts.

Then why couldn't I win those hearts?

Always been awake with full dedication,

Then why couldn't I reach the final destination?

Is it only the luck that counts?

Or is there some kind of karma?

Will I ever reach my target? 

Or there's something more to come in this drama?

Dear Almighty, give me the strength,

To endure the failures and swallow the pain.

Show me the direction, to be alive again..

  1. This is so immense and deep poem. Emotions are expressed beautifully... The poem contains both bad past moments and a sense of hope as well as the spirit to fight... a well mix of emotions... very well written...

    1. Thanks a lot for your kind words Ashish.. I'm glad you found it so :)

  2. Amazingly beautiful! Just believe in yourself and rest will follow!

    1. Yes, you're right Alok. Happy to hear from you after a long time :)

  3. Amazing ! Hope is very essential. One must not lose hope. *Follow your heart and stay positive * :)

  4. Nicely written Deeshani. May hope replace helplessness forever.


Do share your valuable views :)


2016 3 day quote challenge Abstinence adventure agony aim article artificial intelligence atrocities baby battle Bavity be strong beathless beats beauty beggar beginning benefits best friend blossoms BodyShaming bohemian boho brand bucket-list charm cherished choices circle of life city lights clouds colors compromise crush culture current dabur honey daughter death deception decisions deforestation desire destiny determination diet dilemma discrimination dominance doubts dream Dreams driver drizzle droplets ecstasy education efforts English failure fantastico fate father fatherhood features feelings fiction fighter flash 55 flash fiction fluctuating flute food foodlove fortune free freshness fruits fun garden girl goal goals god GPS grand father greenery Haiku happiness hard hard work hardships hatred health healthy heart break heartbreak heartbreaks hero hippie history honey diet honor Horlicks Growth plus hostel hunger hurt impact incredible independent India Indian CEO's innocence insensate inspirational intensity journey joy judgements Karma laugh life lifestyle loneliness longing lost hope love luck Magic mature melancholy melody menstruation Miraculous town misery mockery motivation Music My experience mysteries myths nature navigation New year nightmare numb One sentence fiction opposites optimism pain parents partakers of sinful blood peace pepper peppy personal poem poetry possitivity prejudice prejudices present programming pugs questions rage rain Rdicule reality redi-GO rejection relationships resolutions restraint review rhyme rickshaw romantic sacrifice sacrifices satisfaction scenery self love shaming short story sinful nature singing sister social cause songs spread love spring Steve Jobs story street sufferings sunshine blogger award suppression survivor sweet taboo tears technology teenage terrifying thoughts time today torrents tough travel trees trespassing tribute unchained unconditional love vocabulary warrior waterfall wedding weight-loss winters Woman womanhood women empowerment world young

Hello there..!! :)

Subscribe to My Blog