Torrents of the leak,
Dribbling down the peak.
Jet flow travels,
oozing out of gravels.
Plantation is the hedge,
With forest at the edge.
Current flowing, rushing,
dripping, splashing, gushing!
Monday, 13 July 2015
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first thing that comes to my mind as i read poem is sound of waterfall.I find this peaceful. :)
ReplyDeleteSo glad to know you found it peaceful. Thanks for stopping by. :)
DeleteRefreshes my Niagara Falls trip. Lovely writing, Deeshani.
ReplyDeleteI glad to know that. Thank you so much.. :)
Deletesplash splash... nice Deeshani :-)
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DeleteLines as good as the pic. :)
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DeleteNice rhyme :) Reminds me of a few Falls in Kerala :)
ReplyDeleteWould love to know more about them. Thanks a lot :)
DeleteBeautifully put... love your rhyme style :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I'm so glad that you loved it :)
DeleteYou have a wonderful sense of rhyming Deeshani. One can close eyes and imagine the jet flows oozing out of gravels. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words. They motivate me to write even more. :))
DeleteLovely flow of words.. :)
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Thanks a lot dear :)
DeleteSerenity and beauty.
DeleteThank you so much.. Welcome to my blog.. :)
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