The Ghosts of the sky,
Launching dominion over hills.
When dreary zones are dry,
Their dark shadow thrills.
Sorcery of the scenery,
Packed with watery drops.
Escorting the greenery,
The white hats of crops.
Sunday, 12 July 2015
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beautiful :) really like use of metaphor here :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sachin, glad you liked it. :)
DeleteI love the use of words here :)
ReplyDelete"The Ghosts of the sky", "Sorcery of the scenery" - my favourite usages :)
I'm glad to know that Teny. Your choice seems to be magical indeed :D Thanks for reading :)
DeleteYour choices of metaphors bowled me over. Superb! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear. That's so sweet of you to say :)
DeleteBeautiful poem Deesha,loved the metaphorical usage , described is the mundane,with the hands of skill and mind of pearly words:)GO On..love to read more of your works:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton dear, it's good to see you here. Keep visiting :)
DeleteLovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
Deletewhite hats of crops~ so lovely! This will stay with me for a long time.
ReplyDeleteYou painted a beautiful painting with your words dear :)
I am so glad to hear that dear. Thanks a bunch. lots of hugs. :)
DeleteLovely lines Deeshani the kinds that one would like to read over and over again.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, it means a lot. :))
DeleteEvery time I read you, I am short of words. You are too good, Deeshani :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, You're such a sweetheart. :)
DeleteVery lovely poetry, love the words.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear :)
DeleteBeautiful :)
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