Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Haiku- Rain Dance

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Eager to advance,

 In his tuxedo and pants.

 Proposed for rain dance.
She just gave a glance,

 He didn't lose this crucial chance,

 And exhaled romance.
Endearing couple danced,

 In exhilarated trance,

 On blissful expanse.

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32 comments:
  1. Anonymous29 July 2015 at 04:57

    Loved this...rhyming is so good.

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  2. Archana Kapoor29 July 2015 at 05:33

    very well written Deeshani... loved the last para...
    btw - I like the way you write rhyming verses... it's something I never do because I like to keep it different from my regular poems... that reminds me that I haven't written a regular poem in ages since the day I got hooked to writing Haiku :-)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA29 July 2015 at 13:51

      I'm sure you'd be the queen of the regular poems as well.. Looking forward to read one soon from your side ;) And thanks a lot..!! It's always good to hear from you :) Much love <3

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  3. Saru Singhal29 July 2015 at 05:35

    This is beautiful. Never miss a chance, you never know when you get lucky.

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA29 July 2015 at 13:52

      Thank you so much and yes you never know what may be coming for you! :)

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  4. sachin prabhu29 July 2015 at 06:09

    you got rhyming in haiku too :D awesome :D

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA29 July 2015 at 13:53

      Hehe I even rhyme when I talk.. Got so used to it.. Can't help it :D

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  5. Indrani29 July 2015 at 07:04

    How romantic! Very nice.

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  6. Uppal29 July 2015 at 11:02

    sweetly romantic!

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA29 July 2015 at 13:55

      Thank you so much Ma'am.. I'm glad you liked it :)

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  7. Anita29 July 2015 at 12:14

    Romantic :)
    Nice words & choice of pic.
    Rain-dance reminds me of Hindi movie- Jab We met- 'Tum se hi' song

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA29 July 2015 at 13:57

      Thank you so much.. Tum se hi is one of my favorites :)

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  8. purba chakraborty29 July 2015 at 15:34

    So romantic, Deeshani :) I love everything about rain especially music, dance and romance :)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA30 July 2015 at 02:58

      Thank you so much dearest :) I too love the rain :)

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  9. Teny29 July 2015 at 18:28

    Rain and dance! Amazing experience! :)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA30 July 2015 at 02:59

      Absolutely! :D Thanks much for the visit Teny :)

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  10. Bushra Muzaffar29 July 2015 at 23:03

    Dancing in the rain. Forgetting about the pain. ...what a thought of writing a poem about it. There's lovely romantic rhyme and rythm to this poem :)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA30 July 2015 at 02:59

      Thanks a ton.. I'm glad you liked it :) Keep visiting! :)

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  11. Maitreni Mishra29 July 2015 at 23:12

    This is is so romantic Deeshani. Your rhymes make it all the more blissful. I love everything about rains that you have incorporated in it.

    PS: Loved the cover pic used. <3

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA30 July 2015 at 03:01

      Aww thanks much sweetie.. and I love the too :) <3

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  12. Kokila Gupta30 July 2015 at 01:37

    Romantic ..lyrical ...sweet .Beautifully penned girl :) :)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA30 July 2015 at 03:01

      Thanks a ton dear.. so glad you liked it :))

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  13. Somali K Chakrabarti31 July 2015 at 19:55

    Dancing in trance makes it replete with romance. Beautiful Deeshani. :))

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA1 August 2015 at 14:22

      Sure it does..!! thanks a lot.. I'm glad you liked it :) :)

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  14. Rakesh Pandey1 August 2015 at 08:01

    Very beautiful!

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  15. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder2 August 2015 at 20:25

    Beautiful.... I loved the rhyming here...:-)

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  16. Darshith Badiyani3 August 2015 at 02:21

    Wonderful poem and great rhyming with the essence of the scene intact till the end :)

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    1. DEESHANI BATRA3 August 2015 at 12:45

      Thanks a lot.. so glad to know you found it so :)

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