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Eager to advance,
In his tuxedo and pants.
Proposed for rain dance.
She just gave a glance,
He didn't lose this crucial chance,
And exhaled romance.
Endearing couple danced,
In exhilarated trance,
On blissful expanse.
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Loved this...rhyming is so good.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.. Glad you liked it :)
Deletevery well written Deeshani... loved the last para...
ReplyDeletebtw - I like the way you write rhyming verses... it's something I never do because I like to keep it different from my regular poems... that reminds me that I haven't written a regular poem in ages since the day I got hooked to writing Haiku :-)
I'm sure you'd be the queen of the regular poems as well.. Looking forward to read one soon from your side ;) And thanks a lot..!! It's always good to hear from you :) Much love <3
DeleteThis is beautiful. Never miss a chance, you never know when you get lucky.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and yes you never know what may be coming for you! :)
Deleteyou got rhyming in haiku too :D awesome :D
ReplyDeleteHehe I even rhyme when I talk.. Got so used to it.. Can't help it :D
DeleteHow romantic! Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.. So glat you found it so :))
Deletesweetly romantic!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ma'am.. I'm glad you liked it :)
DeleteRomantic :)
ReplyDeleteNice words & choice of pic.
Rain-dance reminds me of Hindi movie- Jab We met- 'Tum se hi' song
Thank you so much.. Tum se hi is one of my favorites :)
DeleteSo romantic, Deeshani :) I love everything about rain especially music, dance and romance :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dearest :) I too love the rain :)
DeleteRain and dance! Amazing experience! :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! :D Thanks much for the visit Teny :)
DeleteDancing in the rain. Forgetting about the pain. ...what a thought of writing a poem about it. There's lovely romantic rhyme and rythm to this poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton.. I'm glad you liked it :) Keep visiting! :)
DeleteThis is is so romantic Deeshani. Your rhymes make it all the more blissful. I love everything about rains that you have incorporated in it.
ReplyDeletePS: Loved the cover pic used. <3
Aww thanks much sweetie.. and I love the too :) <3
DeleteRomantic ..lyrical ...sweet .Beautifully penned girl :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton dear.. so glad you liked it :))
DeleteDancing in trance makes it replete with romance. Beautiful Deeshani. :))
ReplyDeleteSure it does..!! thanks a lot.. I'm glad you liked it :) :)
DeleteVery beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteBeautiful.... I loved the rhyming here...:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteWonderful poem and great rhyming with the essence of the scene intact till the end :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.. so glad to know you found it so :)
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