Monday, 20 July 2015

Miraculous Town

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Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,

Azure sky flashing the brightest hue.

Instantly the greens seized the view,

Grasses engulfed in morning dew.


Then, silvery glare struck my sight,

The shimmering hills, a lustrous delight.

Clouds dazzling with tints of white,

Guiding back the glory in light.


Rocks and pebbles tinged with brown,

In the aesthetic hamlet of fair renown.

Ogling the jumble of colors all around,

Confessing the grandeur of miraculous town.
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28 comments:
  1. Unknown20 July 2015 at 03:27

    how come you rhyme every poem so well like a solved puzzle :D fan of your poems ! keep writing :)

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    1. Deeshani20 July 2015 at 05:07

      hehe.. Thanks for your kind words,.. means a lot :)

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  2. Ravish Mani20 July 2015 at 05:17

    What a picture you have painted with your words, Deeshani! So fresh & delightful. Lived it. :)

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    1. Deeshani20 July 2015 at 05:57

      Thank you so much Ravish. Glad you found it so. :)

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  3. Anonymous20 July 2015 at 08:49

    Visually appealing and filled with love, passion, gratitude and power vibes, Deeshani:)

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    1. Deeshani20 July 2015 at 13:42

      Thanks a ton for your kind words Vishal. :)

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  4. K.A. Acharya20 July 2015 at 10:40

    Wow :) Your words have created a wonderful picture - indeed a miraculous town.

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  5. Ananya20 July 2015 at 16:11

    Beautifully Penned

    Ananya Tales

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  6. Unknown20 July 2015 at 19:47

    what a picture and what amazing words to go with it Deeshani :-) awesome! :-)

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  7. Indrani20 July 2015 at 21:22

    The words have complimented the pic well. :)

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:38

      I am so glad to know that. Thank you.. :))

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  8. Unknown20 July 2015 at 21:33

    Wow...What a beginning!

    "Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,
    Azure sky flashing the brightest hue."

    And equally beautiful, it continues...Mesmerizing dear :')

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:40

      Awww.. thanks a lot dear.. Your kind words always stimulate me to write more. :))

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  9. Sri Kri20 July 2015 at 22:34

    Amazing poem.

    Cheers,

    Sriram & Krithiga

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:41

      Thanks a lot. I'm glad to know that.Welcome to my blog :))

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  10. Purba chakraborty21 July 2015 at 01:46

    I loved the rhyming flow of the poem. Very pretty and delightful :)

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:42

      Thank you dear :) I am glad that you found it so :))

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  11. Unknown21 July 2015 at 06:56

    What could be more refreshing than grasses engulfed in morning dew! A beautiful ode to the grandeur of a miraculous town.

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:43

      Absolutely! Thank you so much. It's always good to hear from you :)

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  12. Teny21 July 2015 at 07:45

    The use of picture and the words painting the picture - inspires me to travel! :)

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:44

      I am glad that it could. Thanks for the visit :))

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  13. Renu Vyas21 July 2015 at 11:00

    You create such a beautiful picture with your words..lovely !!! :)

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    1. Deeshani21 July 2015 at 11:46

      That's really sweet of you to say :) Thank you and welcome to my blog :)
      Keep visiting!

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  14. Maniparna24 July 2015 at 09:40

    Such a town always is there in our dreams..isn't it? Beautifully painted with God's own pallette...

    The rhyming is wonderfully done... :-)

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    1. Deeshani24 July 2015 at 09:48

      Yes absolutely! Thank you so much for the visit. :)

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