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Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,
Azure sky flashing the brightest hue.
Instantly the greens seized the view,
Grasses engulfed in morning dew.
Then, silvery glare struck my sight,
The shimmering hills, a lustrous delight.
Clouds dazzling with tints of white,
Guiding back the glory in light.
Rocks and pebbles tinged with brown,
In the aesthetic hamlet of fair renown.
Ogling the jumble of colors all around,
Confessing the grandeur of miraculous town.
how come you rhyme every poem so well like a solved puzzle :D fan of your poems ! keep writing :)
ReplyDeletehehe.. Thanks for your kind words,.. means a lot :)
DeleteWhat a picture you have painted with your words, Deeshani! So fresh & delightful. Lived it. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ravish. Glad you found it so. :)
DeleteVisually appealing and filled with love, passion, gratitude and power vibes, Deeshani:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton for your kind words Vishal. :)
DeleteWow :) Your words have created a wonderful picture - indeed a miraculous town.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Keep visiting. :)
DeleteBeautifully Penned
ReplyDeleteAnanya Tales
Thank you so much dear :)
Deletewhat a picture and what amazing words to go with it Deeshani :-) awesome! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your kind words :)
DeleteThe words have complimented the pic well. :)
ReplyDeleteI am so glad to know that. Thank you.. :))
DeleteWow...What a beginning!
ReplyDelete"Popping my eyes on the vista of blue,
Azure sky flashing the brightest hue."
And equally beautiful, it continues...Mesmerizing dear :')
Awww.. thanks a lot dear.. Your kind words always stimulate me to write more. :))
DeleteAmazing poem.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Thanks a lot. I'm glad to know that.Welcome to my blog :))
DeleteI loved the rhyming flow of the poem. Very pretty and delightful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :) I am glad that you found it so :))
DeleteWhat could be more refreshing than grasses engulfed in morning dew! A beautiful ode to the grandeur of a miraculous town.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! Thank you so much. It's always good to hear from you :)
DeleteThe use of picture and the words painting the picture - inspires me to travel! :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad that it could. Thanks for the visit :))
DeleteYou create such a beautiful picture with your words..lovely !!! :)
ReplyDeleteThat's really sweet of you to say :) Thank you and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteKeep visiting!
Such a town always is there in our dreams..isn't it? Beautifully painted with God's own pallette...
ReplyDeleteThe rhyming is wonderfully done... :-)
Yes absolutely! Thank you so much for the visit. :)
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