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Despite of being adamant,
she was guilty of trespassing,
the guidelines that she established, herself.
It wasn't something,
that she intended,
or had planned for.
On the spur of the moment,
she was tempted!
to commit the forbidden act.
Finally, she nullified her guilt,
of eating the mud cake
by working out for extra hours.
Wow.Was seriously thinking the reason for her guilty.The final stanza reveals it.Hahaha.Lovely.:).
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Sriram & Krithiga
Haha.. That's the beauty of fiction ;) Thanks much for stopping by. :)
DeleteHa ha this was brilliant:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. Keep visiting! :)
DeleteOh, I have done that trespass. Such a clever piece!
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Indeed, we all commit such tiny breaches in our lives.. Thanks a lot Susie.. And welcome to my space :)
DeleteGreat poem on trespassing and repenting, with a twist :D
ReplyDeleteYay!.. I'm glad to know that.. many thanks for reading! :)
DeleteHa ha nice one...and yummy too. :)
ReplyDeleteHehe.. Mud cake is indeed the yummiest ;) Thanks a lot :)
DeleteSometimes we make rules for ourselves which are too difficult to follow through.
ReplyDeleteTrue Kerry.. Thanks a lot for the visit and welcome to my blog! :)
Deletehaha, that was a fun read!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Debajyoti :D Getting inspired from your humor :D
DeleteTwist in the tail!!
ReplyDeleteBingo..! :)
DeleteTempting deal!
ReplyDeleteHaha.. thanks a lot Ma'am :)
DeleteLolz... Delicious ;)
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Hehe.. thanks much Ananya :)
DeleteGood ending. Made me smile. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to know that. Keep visiting :)
Deleteha ha :D Witty writing :)
ReplyDeleteHehe thanks much dearie :*
DeleteAwww.. hats off to your wit. Loved this piece Deshani <3
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot my dear.. I'm glad to know you loved it :)
DeletePoetry with lovely sense of humour. Enjoyed it, Deeshani. Full Paisa Wasool piece :)
ReplyDeleteMy purpose is served then..;) Thanks a lot Ravish.. :)
Deleteawww.... :-)
ReplyDeletethat reminds me that I have to start my workouts too... :-)
Oh that's cool.. I am too lazy to do it :D
DeleteThanks for stopping by.. :) <3
Hahaha... I do that, I mean eat, but I never ever work out. Hence the extra pounds on my body.
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
We are in the same boat buddy ;)
DeleteThanks much.. :)
this is so nice... an interesting read... great work Deeshani... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ashish.. glad to know that :)
DeleteLoved it especially the last stanza brought a smile.
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