Monday, 3 August 2015

Haiku- Thunderbolt

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Roaring thunderbolt,

Ear-piercing, cacophonous,

Sky's assault on Sea.


Dim pitch-black blanket,

Luminiferous lightning,

Nature's revenge from thee!

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24 comments:
  1. Unknown3 August 2015 at 14:20

    na na.. why revenge... it's another beautiful expression of nature ;-)
    nice lines Deeshani :-)

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    1. Deeshani3 August 2015 at 14:22

      Yes! perhaps :) But I get frightened sometimes :D

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    2. Unknown3 August 2015 at 14:37

      am sure.. it can be really frightening at times... :-)

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    3. Deeshani3 August 2015 at 14:53

      Hehe.. thank you so much for stopping by.. ^_^

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  2. Sreedhar Bhattaram3 August 2015 at 17:33

    Rightly said Deeshani.. None can stop that Roar in Nature and there alone our Ultimate Good lies.. Thanks for sharing the nice Poetical Expressions!

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 01:46

      Absolutely! Thanks a lot, Sir. Have a nice day :)

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  3. magiceye3 August 2015 at 18:06

    Liked the 1st one :)

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 01:52

      Thank you so much and welcome to my space :)

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  4. Vishal Bheeroo3 August 2015 at 19:29

    It's such a beautiful expression and different forms of Thunderbolt:)

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 01:53

      Thanks a lot Vishal.. so glad that you liked it :)

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  5. Sri Kri3 August 2015 at 20:42

    Wow.Top-notch poetic expression Deeshani.Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers,

    Sriram & Krithiga

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 01:53

      Thanks a lot for liking.. God bless to both of you :) Keep visiting :)

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  6. Unknown3 August 2015 at 22:59

    Nature's fury brimming with varied emotions in your poetry... superbly penned Deeshani :)

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 01:56

      Thanks much dear.. It always feels great to know your views on my poems.. :)

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  7. Indrani4 August 2015 at 05:03

    Yes in a dark night thunders can be scary.
    Haven't heard one for a long time now.
    Nice lines. :)

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 13:58

      You bet :D Thanks a lot for stopping by :)

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  8. Saru Singhal4 August 2015 at 08:47

    Loved both. If you play with nature, we have to pay the price.

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    1. Deeshani4 August 2015 at 13:59

      True that.. I hope people get this fact in their minds.. thank you so much.. I'm glad you liked it :)

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  9. The mirror4 August 2015 at 08:49

    Nice.

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  10. Purba chakraborty4 August 2015 at 12:24

    Wow! Sky's assault on sea...beautifully described dear. Loved this haiku :)

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  11. Ravish Mani5 August 2015 at 03:41

    Hehe... Deeshani, it paints a picture of furious Indra with Vajra in his hand, ready to produce thunderbolts to stop someone on the earth from meditating.

    Enjoyed this perspective too. Have a great Sawaan ahead! :)

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    1. Deeshani6 August 2015 at 22:21

      Wow! I never thought of that.. that would be a treat to watch though :D Thanks a lot Ravish. Keep visiting :)

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