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If I were a pen,
I'd have fabricated,
an astounding drama.
If I were the shoes,
I'd have climbed the colossal mountains,
To touch the vivid sky.
If I were a bird,
I'd have flew till the horizon,
To explore the zenith.
If I were the light,
I'd have kept gleaming,
In the darkest nights.
If only,
I were not just a mere dream,
But an earnest intention,
I'd have made myself dignified..
Seeing a lovely poem after a gap Deeshani.. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear. :) I'm sorry for not posting anything from quite a while.. But I'l try my best to post more often :)
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ReplyDeleteIf I were a camera,
I would fore-click all the glorious moments
That you would soon achieve with your brilliant composition :*
Awww.. that's so sweet of you to say, my dear.. thanks a ton for the lovely comment.. :) Hugs! :*
DeleteGreat poem. These if-only feelings are helpful and harmful also.
ReplyDeleteTrue that.. Thank you so much for appreciating :)
DeleteWow that is well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ma'am :)
Deletebeautiful Deeshani... loved the birds wala verse :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd I like your sweet wala comment on this post :) :*
DeleteSo nicely explained our aspirations amidst the constraints around.. Well said, Deeshani
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sir, Have a nice day!
Deletelovely creation... great piece of writing... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ashish :)
DeleteThat's a lovely poem, Deeshani. I didn't know dream could write that good :-D
ReplyDeleteIt could do wonders if given the wings to fly.. :) Thank you so much :)
DeleteSuch a wonderful poem that touches the chords of the heart and make you ponder.
ReplyDeleteMissed you and your poems, Deeshani.
So good to read you. Much love :-*
I wish to be the birds and the shoes :D Lovely work :)
ReplyDeleteAnd what if you were a vampire? ;)
Brilliant poem Deeshani.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
We are full of so many If's...beautifully, emotive piece
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