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I walk through the miles,
Wearing a wide smile.
I trust to the core,
Get crushed more and more.
I get subdued by the fate,
Thrashed by the hate.
I see the melancholy shadows,
Savage invasion of sorrows.
But..
I can spot the sun shining,
And the dreadful darkness declining.
I'll rise as a morning Sun,
Fight back till the night's done.
I'll wrestle with these tough times,
Penning my brawny broody rhymes..

Loved the flow of it, not a fan of rhymes tho I loved the idea about it. Quite inspiring
ReplyDeleteThank you Udit.. I'm glad you liked the idea.. keep visiting :)
Deletebeautiful... love the positivity of the whole poem... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks much dear.. It's always so good to see your comments :)
DeleteLast two lines sum up the positive approach!
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Deletethanks much for reading and appreciating it ma'am! :)
Delightful poem spinning positive vibes. Great one Deeshani:)
ReplyDeleteSo glad to know that Vishal.. thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteBeautiful and free flowing! What else one can want from a poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
Deletegreat poem... loved the way you penned it beautifully... At the same time this poem has a positive conclusion to fight and learn from the sun which is awesome...
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Ashish.. I'm glad you found it so:)
DeleteThis one has inspired me for the day :)
ReplyDeleteAnd this comment has inspired me to write more ;) Thanks for stopping by Teny :)
DeleteQuite soulful as always Deeshani :) But, "I see the melancholy shadows, Savage invasion of sorrows." is want grooved me in to the core <3 Super!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad to know that Maitreni :) Your lovely comments always stimulate my blogger side :) Hugs!<3
DeleteI love the way you rhyme and play with words! A lovely poem, dear :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton..! Purba.. I'm glad you loved it :)
DeleteOptimism gains over all the obstacles.... perseverance helps us to become a winner at the end of the day.... :-) Beautifully penned, dear...
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! Thanks much, dear :)
DeleteGreat!
ReplyDeleteCopied an pasted in my word file!
I will try to read every morning to keep my spirits high!
Thanks for sharing!
Hey, thanks Yash.. I'm glad that it could motivate you so much :)
DeleteInspiring and full of fight-back spirit. Captivating the inner demons takes more effort and some inspiration goes a long way :)
ReplyDeleteYes Indeed it does :) Many thanks for stopping by Darshith :)
DeleteIndeed Fight back and Keep at it and the tough times soon vanish ..
ReplyDeletelovely positive poem..
Bikram's
Thanks a lot.. and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteSpirit matters. An inspiring poem. As Napoleon said - Death is nothing, but to live defeated and inglorious is to die daily.
ReplyDeleteA great quote indeed! Spirit is all what it takes to reach the destination along with the hard work.. thank you so much :)
DeleteYour poem might be broody but the spirit of optimism shines through in it Deeshani, and the words flow effortlessly.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear.. I'm glad to hear your kind words.. keep visiting :)
DeleteLoving the Inspiring poem.You have penned it down very well Deeshani.Words flow naturally.Great Talent.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Thank you so much for your kind words :)
DeleteThat is so positive. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. :)
DeleteSo beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Sachin :)
DeleteDepression is like the dark night but there is light at the end of the tunnel as you rightly express....
ReplyDeleteRightly said.. Thanks much for stopping by :)
DeleteNice flow and gist of the poem. Rhyme is Prime...I find rhyming poems a little difficult. I write freestyle generally :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, my case is the other way round.. I find rhyming much easier than freestyle :D Thank you so much..and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteLovely Poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteNice lines... keeping them coming..
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