Gently tickle her skin.
Scent of the moist loam,
Deliberately fortifies her desolation.
Chime of the oozing droplets,
Cheerfully accompanies her solitude.
Sight of the panorama,
Sensation of the mild wind,
The glory of the sun,
With artistry of the rainbow,
Provokes her to abandon her seclusion,
And embosom the mother nature.
Who wouldn't want to get drenched after reading this! Fun and embracing nature in its purest form.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
Thanks a lot dear.. Happy to hear from u after so long.. :)
Deleteit's drizzling here right now.. and what a perfect time to read this. my day starts with your beautiful lines. :)
ReplyDeleteA Rat's Nibble : Calvin And Me - I & II
Thanks a lot my dear :)
Deletequite a drizzly affair :)
ReplyDeletehaha.. thanks a lot.. glad to see you here.. keep visiting :)
DeleteThe poem's beginning makes me think that it is a poem meant for children.....with the play of words....but then it catches a different mood....and becomes almost magical......very beautiful.....
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteGreat :) Tip tip barsa paani!
ReplyDeleteHaha.. Thank you :)
DeleteA girl's aura redefined with the nature at its primitive best! :') Beautiful as ever dear
ReplyDeleteAww thanks much dear.. Hugs<3
DeleteI love rain and so this poem was like magic for me. Beautifully written dear. Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteAww.. thanks a lot dearie.. I love the rain too.. so high five :D
DeleteNice one :) It has been raining here the whole day, and this made me go for a two-wheeler ride in the rain :D
ReplyDeleteHad vada and tea :)
I wish I could experience the same.. I'm jealous :D
DeleteAnyway, thanks for the visit Teny :)
Your poem is fitting the mood here in Bangalore! :) Great read for me.
ReplyDeleteYay..!! I'm glad you liked it :) Thank you :)
DeleteThis is beautiful Deeshani. Perfectly conveys the bliss of soaking in a drizzle. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ma'am. :)
DeletePERFECT !! I totally loved it Deeshani .. And I so agree with Sunaina here :)
ReplyDeleteits awesome :)
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