Sunday, 1 November 2015

Lost Hope

I've let you down,

My hopes are drowned.

The fancy wishes and matchless dreams,

Have shattered now to furthest extremes.

And my dark nights are haunted with screams.

The dejecting voices yelling in my ears,

You can't do it, inflaming my fears..

I know I've been indolent, in my path

Missed numerous opportunities,

But I've also been firm in the most parts.

Then why couldn't I win those hearts?

Always been awake with full dedication,

Then why couldn't I reach the final destination?

Is it only the luck that counts?

Or is there some kind of karma?

Will I ever reach my target? 

Or there's something more to come in this drama?

Dear Almighty, give me the strength,

To endure the failures and swallow the pain.

Show me the direction, to be alive again..

  1. This is so immense and deep poem. Emotions are expressed beautifully... The poem contains both bad past moments and a sense of hope as well as the spirit to fight... a well mix of emotions... very well written...

    1. Thanks a lot for your kind words Ashish.. I'm glad you found it so :)

  2. Amazingly beautiful! Just believe in yourself and rest will follow!

    1. Yes, you're right Alok. Happy to hear from you after a long time :)

  3. Amazing ! Hope is very essential. One must not lose hope. *Follow your heart and stay positive * :)

  4. Nicely written Deeshani. May hope replace helplessness forever.


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