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I concealed, he peeked
I quietened, he perceived
I attacked, he kissed
I drained, he fueled
I prayed, he heard
I rejoiced, he cheered
I pointed, he pleased
I dressed, he clicked
I cried, he healed
I grieved, he eased
I ran, he stilled
I parted, he gripped..
Good one, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThank you and welcome to ITOT. :)
DeleteMind blowing and fantastic poem, Deeshani:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vishal.. glad to hear that. :)
Deletewow... tis amazing Dee :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Archie. Muah :*
DeleteTouching. . Quite romantic too:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.. keep visiting. :)
DeleteWow..This is so divine! Loved your tactful choice of words. :)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Love. :)
DeleteNice...
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DeleteThat's so sweet. I liked the style :)
ReplyDeleteOMG...this is so so so romantic...a soul connection indeed :) <3
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